中考英语作文:谈谈你的业余爱好 My Hobby
每个人都有自己的业余爱好,有益的业余爱好不但可以陶冶我们的情操,增强我们的体质,放松我们的身心,还能让我们在学习或工作时精力更旺盛,效率更高。作为一名中学生,你在忙碌的学习之余做些什么?请根据以下提示写一篇短文,谈一谈你的业余爱好。
1.写作要点提示:
(1)你的业余爱好是什么;
(2)重点讲述你从事业余爱好的一次经历;
(3)你的业余爱好对你学习、生活的影响。
2.写作要求:
短文的内容应包含所提示的要点,语言要流畅,可围绕提示要点适当增加情节,使短文的意思连贯;短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;短文的词数在90 个左右。
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I like drawing.It does bring me happiness.(爱好是什么)
As a kid,I was keen on those lines and curves drawn on paper made into animals and scenes.It really could show beauty to people and express my feelings.And then I took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well.【高分句型一】But at that time,I just did it for fun.
Years went by,I got into a long period of time filled with pressure in study.And I found it so good a way to relax.It did not any longer play an unimportant role in my living,but bacame my friend.(一次经历)
Since that time,I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life.【高分句型二】This is my hobby,not just a hobby,but also a true friend.(对你学习、生活的影响)
分析 【高分句型一】
And then I took a course so that I could get close to it and see it well后来,我参加了美术课程,这样我就可以与绘画的距离更近,也可以更好地了解它
so that引导的目的状语从句.
【高分句型二】
Since that time,I have felt it like a nice person deep in my heart who can talk with me with true words and make me happy with life自从那次,我感觉美术就像是一个我心里的那个和我真心交谈,让我开心的人.
who作为关系词的定语从句,修饰前面的person.