2014四川高考英语 --- 新短文改错点睛(4)

 (2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student from China, seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who communicating with others. I speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious I'm really looking forward to your approval.
 (2013·琼海市质监)
When I first learned to write in English, I into many difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into English. My teacher advised me to keep diary. I followed her advice put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy to myself on paper as I was learning to express in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their were a great encouragement to me.
 (2013·石家庄市二模)
Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. their arrival, they were welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and the floor. Everything done, they in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because what they did joy to others. It also enriched own experience. They made a promise they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.
 (2013·河南省六市第二次联考)
It's reported that many people of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should road safety seriously in our daily life. While the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, is both good for themselves and others.
In word, obeying the traffic rules what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.
 (2013·齐齐哈尔市二模)
Dear David，
I have recently felt guilty, sleepless at night. You may wonder . To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I cheat in exams and I just can't stop . In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for . Besides, I sometimes referred to my notebooks copied something. As you know, cheating much harm to our learning and self­confidence. It's time that I action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice.
Looking forward to your reply!
 (2013·宝鸡市三模)
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,  Jack was going home by bike as usual he heard a woman screaming  for help.Then he was riding quickly the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman by a man with a knife in hand.Without hesitation, Jack made immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand, since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.
 (2013·长春市第四次调测)
I still remember my middle school life in  Changchun. I was then in school for from Wenchuan. As we all left home an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we play basketball on the playground, in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
 (2013·甘肃省二诊)
Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not develop the habit of and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown­ups to make children want things that they don't need.
 (2013·乌鲁木齐三诊)
Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only up our strength and endurance it also helps increase our balance and determination. O n the other ， it allows us to get outside enjoy  nature. For those of who spend our days working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite . conclusion, it is good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.
 (2013·昆明市适应性检测)
We had a discussion on “overnight­fame” last week. Nowadays, many people crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as example. Only after his hard did he become successful. we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is the process in which try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .
 (2013·浙江省五校联考)
A young man called Low­Carbon Brother a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low­carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help carbon dioxide in the air. For example, always picks up some waste paper on the street uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a life with so many modern around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.
（2013 ·海南质检四）

1. exciting → excited  2. ∧ free →be  3. 去掉a  4. you →we  5. in-to 
   6. worry → worried  7. it → that  8. but → so / and  9. interests → interest  10. greatly → great

（2013 ·石家庄二次质检）