外研版SB4 MODULE 3 BODY LANGUAGE 同步写作
人物传记是记叙文体的一种,但人物传记主要写名人或伟人的生平、事迹,因此,写人物传记时要抓住其主要事迹和人们的评论等。
此类文章以人物为中心组织材料,围绕这个人物写一件或几件事,一般按时间顺序来写。
文章一般分为三部分。
第一部分:描写的人物是谁,对这个人物进行总体介绍。
第二部分:以时间顺序介绍这个人物的生平经历、思想见解和贡献等。
第三部分:写人们对他或她的评价以及对后人的影响等。
因描写的事情都是过去发生的事,所以通常用过去时。介绍他人的经历和事迹应用第三人称。
1.be born in ...
2.be known as ...;be famous for ...;became wellknown to ...
3.What impressed sb.most was that ...
4.set a good example to sb.
5.encourage sb.to do sth.
6.have a deep effect on ...;be deeply affected by ...
7.be respected by ...;be regarded as ...
8.be remembered as ...
[题目要求]
请根据下表的内容提示,以Thomas Edison 为题写一篇著名科学家爱迪生的生平介绍。词数:120~150。
姓名托马斯·爱迪生简介美国历史上主要的科学家和发明家之一。
1. 出生于1847年2月11日,并在美国长大。
2. 小时候被认为不值得受教育,因此只受过三个月的学校教育。然而由于母亲的教育,他对读书产生了浓厚的兴趣。
3. 10岁时,就有了自己的实验室;12岁时,通过在火车上卖报纸谋生。
4. 一生有很多发明,尤其是以发明电灯而闻名,为世人做出了巨大贡献。
5. 1931年10月18日逝世,全美国熄灯一分钟以示哀悼。
[三步作文法]
第一步:搜索词汇
1.主要的 leading
2.值得做 be_worth_doing
3.教育 education(n.)educate(v.)
4.很多 a_quantity_of/_quantities_of
5.因……而闻名 be_famous_for
6.谋生 earn_one's_living
7.因此 as_a_result
8.通过……方式 by_doing_sth.
第二步:由词造句
1.小时候被认为不值得受教育。
①As a boy, he was once thought not_to_be_worth_educating.
②As a boy, it was once thought that_he_was_not_worth_educating.
2.然而由于母亲的教育,他对读书产生了浓厚的兴趣。
①However, educated_by_his_mother,_he took an interest in reading.(educate)
②However, as_a_result_of_his_mother's_education,_he took an interest in reading. (education).
3.12岁时,通过在火车上卖报纸谋生。
①At 12, he earned his living by_selling_newspapers on trains.
②When he was 12 years old, he sold_newspapers to make his living on trains.
4.一生有很多发明,尤其是以发明电灯而闻名,为世人做出了巨大贡献。
①In all his life, he had a quantity of inventions and, was especially famous_for the electric light, making_great_contributions_to_the_world.(v.ing 形式)
②In all his life, he had quantities_of inventions and,was especially wellknown_for the electric light, which_made_great_contributions_to_the_world.(非限制性定语从句)
第三步:连句成篇
Thomas Edison
Thomas Edison,born on February 11th, 1847, was brought up in the United States. He was considered to be one of the leading scientists and inventors in American history.
As a boy, he was once thought not to be worth educating. As a result, he got only three months' education in school. However, educated by his mother, he took an interest in reading. At the age of 10, he had his own liberatory. And at 12, he earned his living by selling newspapers on trains. In all his life, he had a quantity of inventions and,was especially famous for the electric light, making great contributions to the world.
Thomas Edison died on October 18th, 1931. In honor of the important American, electric lights in the United States were out for one minute.
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